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Re: Favorite Soundtracks
Pixar's "The Incredibles" (If musicals count) "Les Miserables" Prince of Egypt is also one of my all-time favourites. And I love all the music on the Looney Tunes cartoon series. ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Hi from new writer Lima Ojima
:smt039 Hi, Lima! Welcome to YWS. :elephant: I'm Searria, but most people here call me "Sea." *shakes hand* It's very nice to meet you. :) I hope you enjoy yourself ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Treachery in the Night
Hello, Noelle. Short stories is a great way to shake a bad case of writers block. Plus, it's fun to introduce yourself to new characters and settings after writing one ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Mostly Human Chapter 4
Hello again, Nutmeg! Yay! I get to be the first one to review this chapter. :) I found myself smiling a lot more in this chapter. I think *says tentatively* ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Beyond Looks
Hi, Ariel. Here as requested. ^^' I don't know much about poetry, but I'll do my best. I also like the simplicity of this poem. Oftentimes poets can get so ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Hi to all
Hi! Welcome to YWS. :elephant: I hope you enjoy yourself here. You might enjoy the Storybook forum. It's a great place to experiment with your writing and characters. If you ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Mostly Human Chapter 3
Here I am again. :D I don't know. Your style of chapter titling is starting to grow on me. :) I liked the way you introduced your new character. You ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Animus
'Ello, June. :) I personally love mythology, and I think you did a nice job of capturing the attitude of the Romans. I took Latin, and technically "animus" is a ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Mostly Human Chapter 2
'Ello again, Nutmegan! You did a better job in this chapter of letting the reader develop connections with the characters before throwing them into a bunch of action. :) The ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Mostly Human Chapter 1
Hi, Nutmegan! I like this fresh take on vampires. Normally, when I read a vampire/werewolf story, I think "Oh, great. Another one." But not today. :D I thank you for ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Hey Everybody
:smt039 Welcome aboard, nutmegan595! I'm Searria, though most people call me "Sea" or "Ria" here. Actually, no one calls me "Ria," but there's no reason why you can't be the ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Paper Key
Hi, there. :) I love your title; it really caught my attention. I think you have a good idea in there, but I feel as though you were trying too ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Road to Recovery
Hi, Brie! I'm glad I picked this piece to do my first review as your former mentor. :D The concept of this piece is very nice, and it's (I know ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Dear Christie
Hi there, Maimoona! You did a nice job of conveying your emotion in such a short space without "telling" the reader. I have some very nit-picky things to point out. ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: The Hunt [in action]
Querp The imp pulled down on his ears, stretching them painfully and moaning, "I don't said too much." He rocked back and forth, curled like a baby. The Witch Hunter ...
Aug 6, 2011
